Various improvements for previous.

1 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/Packages.txt b/Packages.txt
index ac6b7dee10d..c089c9eae3c 100644
--- a/Packages.txt
+++ b/Packages.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# $NetBSD: Packages.txt,v 1.339 2004/07/04 17:35:41 jmmv Exp $
+# $NetBSD: Packages.txt,v 1.340 2004/07/04 17:41:58 wiz Exp $
 ###########################################################################
 
 			==========================
@@ -2878,23 +2878,23 @@ pkgviews User's Guide in pkgsrc/mk/buildlink3/PKGVIEWS_UG.
  ================================================
 
 A "shared directory" is a directory where multiple (and unrelated)
-packages install files.  These directories are problematic because you
-have to add special tricks in the PLIST to conditionally remove them,
-or have some centralized package handle them.
+packages install files.  These directories are problematic because
+you have to add special tricks in the PLIST to conditionally remove
+them, or have some centralized package handle them.
 
-Within pkgsrc, you'll find both approaches mixed.  If a directory is shared
-by few unrelated packages, it's often not worth to add an extra package to
-remove it.  Therefore, one simply does:
+Within pkgsrc, you'll find both approaches.  If a directory is
+shared by a few unrelated packages, it's often not worth to add an
+extra package to remove it.  Therefore, one simply does:
 
-    @unexec ${RMDIR} %D/path/to/shared/package 2>/dev/null || ${TRUE}
+    @unexec ${RMDIR} %D/path/to/shared/directory 2>/dev/null || ${TRUE}
 
-in the PLISTs of all packages affected, instead of the regular "@dirrm" line.
+in the PLISTs of all affected packages, instead of the regular "@dirrm" line.
 
 However, if the directory is shared across many packages, two different
 solutions are available:
 
 1) If the packages have a common dependency, the directory can be removed
-   from it.  For example, see textproc/scrollkeeper, which removes the
+   in that.  For example, see textproc/scrollkeeper, which removes the
    shared directory share/omf.
 
 2) If the packages using the directory are not related at all (they have no
@@ -2915,19 +2915,19 @@ have the following line in it:
 
     USE_DIRS+= xdg-1.1
 
-After regenerating the PLIST, using 'make print-PLIST', you should get the
+After regenerating the PLIST using 'make print-PLIST', you should get the
 right (commented out) lines.
 
 Note that, even if your package is using X11BASE, it must not depend on
 the *-x11-dirs packages.  Just specify the name without that part and pkgsrc
-(specially, mk/dirs.mk) will take care of it.
+(in particular, mk/dirs.mk) will take care of it.
 
 
  10.46 How can I tweak 'make print-PLIST' output?
  ================================================
 
 If you have used any of the *-dirs packages, as explained in 10.45, you
-may have noticed that 'make print-PLIST' outputs a set of @comment's,
+may have noticed that 'make print-PLIST' outputs a set of @comment's
 instead of real @dirrm lines.  You can also do this for specific directories
 and files, so that the results of that command are very close to reality.
 This helps _a lot_ during the update of packages.