- re-adjust sentence widths, and put new sentences on new lines;

- add an appropriate comma;
- correct (also macro wise) / rewrite `EXAMPLES' section;
- replace packages(7) reference in `SEE ALSO' with pkgsrc(7) one
  (src/share/man/man7/packages.7 was removed in 2007);
- remove ``Documentation on the NetBSD Package System'' reference
  from `SEE ALSO' (it's referenced in pkgsrc(7));
- remove unneccesary `.br' macro (and low level macros should
  generally not be used anyway);
- remove `BUGS' section, as the ``bug'' described in it isn't a
  bug at all;
- bump date.

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1 files changed, 21 insertions, 32 deletions

diff --git a/pkgtools/url2pkg/files/url2pkg.8 b/pkgtools/url2pkg/files/url2pkg.8
index a41041b00f3..7662264665d 100644
--- a/pkgtools/url2pkg/files/url2pkg.8
+++ b/pkgtools/url2pkg/files/url2pkg.8
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"	$NetBSD: url2pkg.8,v 1.9 2012/02/26 02:34:43 dholland Exp $
+.\"	$NetBSD: url2pkg.8,v 1.10 2013/05/29 14:37:29 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2001 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 .\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd January 28, 2001
+.Dd May 29, 2013
 .Dt URL2PKG 8
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -47,23 +47,23 @@
 .Nm
 takes the
 .Ar URL
-to a package's distfile that should be
-turned into a package. The
-generated package includes a
+to a package's distfile that should be turned into a package.
+The generated package includes a
 .Pa Makefile
-and a basic set of files to get the
-package going. Any customisations to get the package going need to be
-adjusted manually after
+and a basic set of files to get the package going.
+Any customisations to get the package going need to be adjusted manually after
 .Nm
 has finished its job.
 .Pp
 .Nm
-is intended to help starting to create a package; it is not
-intended to fly on autopilot, though.
+is intended to help starting to create a package;
+it is not intended to fly on autopilot, though.
 .Pp
 The
 .Pa Makefile
-contains all the required variables, such as DISTNAME or MASTER_SITES, but some of them cannot be automatically set. Hence, the user's usual editor is invoked to edit the
+contains all the required variables, such as DISTNAME or MASTER_SITES,
+but some of them cannot be automatically set.
+Hence, the user's usual editor is invoked to edit the
 .Pa Makefile .
 .Pp
 After the
@@ -72,12 +72,12 @@ is completed,
 .Nm
 fetches the archive, and computes its checksum via the
 .Ic make makesum
-target. Then archive extraction is done, via the
+target.
+Then, archive extraction is done, via the
 .Ic make extract
 target, and finally,
 .Nm
-attempts to detect if
-the software uses a
+attempts to detect if the software uses a
 .Ic configure
 script, and if it's from GNU
 .Ic autoconf .
@@ -98,30 +98,19 @@ Name used for the MAINTAINER field in the package
 .Pa Makefile .
 .El
 .Sh EXAMPLES
-.Nm
-.Ar http://www.foo.com/bar/buz.tgz
-.Pp
-Will generate a template
-.Nx
-package for the software that can be found at
-.Ar http://www.foo.com/bar/buz.tgz .
+The following command will generate a template pkgsrc package
+for the software that can be found at
+.Lk http://www.example.com/bar/buz.tgz :
+.Bd -literal
+url2pkg http://www.example.com/bar/buz.tgz
+.Ed
 .Sh SEE ALSO
-.Xr packages 7
-.br
-.Em "Documentation on the NetBSD Package System" ,
-.An Hubert Feyrer Aq hubertf@NetBSD.org ,
-.An Alistair Crooks Aq agc@NetBSD.org .
+.Xr pkgsrc 7
 .Sh AUTHORS
 .Nm
 was written by
 .An Roland Illig Aq rillig@NetBSD.org ,
 enhancing the previous version by
 .An Hubert Feyrer Aq hubertf@NetBSD.org .
-.br
 This man page was written by
 .An Emmanuel Dreyfus Aq manu@NetBSD.org .
-.Sh BUGS
-.Nm
-does not generate an empty
-.Pa patches
-directory.