doc: Fixes for the talloc dynamic type system tutorial.

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/lib/talloc/doc/tutorial_dts.dox b/lib/talloc/doc/tutorial_dts.dox
index 9065d7a1f0..62c425c408 100644
--- a/lib/talloc/doc/tutorial_dts.dox
+++ b/lib/talloc/doc/tutorial_dts.dox
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 /**
 @page libtalloc_dts Chapter 3: Dynamic type system
+
 @section dts Dynamic type system
 
 Generic programming in the C language is very difficult. There is no inheritance
@@ -31,10 +32,10 @@ void specific_function()
 
 Unfortunately, the type information is lost as a result of this type cast. The
 compiler cannot check the type during the compilation nor are we able to do it
-at runtime. Providing an invalid data type to the callback will result
-in unexpected behaviour (not necessarily a crash) of the application. This
-mistake is usually hard to detect because it is not the first thing on the mind
-of the developer.
+at runtime. Providing an invalid data type to the callback will result in
+unexpected behaviour (not necessarily a crash) of the application. This mistake
+is usually hard to detect because it is not the first thing which comes the
+mind.
 
 As we already know, every talloc context contains a name. This name is available
 at any time and it can be used to determine the type of a context even if we
@@ -45,20 +46,20 @@ way of using it to simulate the dynamic type system is to set it directly to the
 type of the variable.
 
 It is recommended to use one of |talloc()| and |talloc_array()| (or its
-variants) to create the context as they set its name to the name of the type
-automatically.
+variants) to create the context as they set its name to the name of the
+given type automatically.
 
-If we have a context with such a name, we can use two similar functions that do
-both the type check and the type cast for us:
+If we have a context with such as a name, we can use two similar functions that
+do both the type check and the type cast for us:
 
 - talloc_get_type()
 - talloc_get_type_abort()
 
 @section dts-examples Examples
 
-Below given is an example of generic programming with talloc - if we provide
-invalid data to the callback, the program will be aborted. This is a sufficient
-reaction for such an error in most applications.
+The following example will show how generic programming with talloc is handled -
+if we provide invalid data to the callback, the program will be aborted. This
+is a sufficient reaction for such an error in most applications.
 
 @code
 void foo_callback(void *pvt)
@@ -76,8 +77,8 @@ int do_foo()
 @endcode
 
 But what if we are creating a service application that should be running for the
-uptime of a server? We may want to abort the application during the development
-process (to make sure the error is not overlooked) but try to recover from the
+uptime of a server, we may want to abort the application during the development
+process (to make sure the error is not overlooked) and try to recover from the
 error in the customer release. This can be achieved by creating a custom abort
 function with a conditional build.
 
@@ -105,4 +106,4 @@ if (str == NULL) {
    name[talloc_new: ../src/main.c:24] expected[char] */
 @endcode
 
-*/
\ No newline at end of file
+*/